Deep... poignant.
I am moved.
Haha, I got a chuckle out of this poem. Great work, Youngman! Very clever.
Thanks for the morning smile!
Did that come from deep inside? Perhaps around the bladder region?
Very moving...so moving in fact I need some toilet paper!
You talk some sh*t at times - but I like it!
Wow! That's some heavy shit, man.Love,Janie
No way to top this comment.
I'm going to sit here and digest that for a while
Good one Youngman. Short and to the point! lol!
gut-wrenching deep meaning! - i gots no puns
How does one get around self defecation? Contract that shit out?
So touching... you can really feel the inner torment of the poet.
How deep did you reach for this one?
That truly is deep.
When you comment, I vibrate.
Deep... poignant.
ReplyDeleteI am moved.
ReplyDeleteHaha, I got a chuckle out of this poem. Great work, Youngman! Very clever.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the morning smile!
ReplyDeleteDid that come from deep inside? Perhaps around the bladder region?
ReplyDeleteVery moving...so moving in fact I need some toilet paper!
ReplyDeleteYou talk some sh*t at times - but I like it!
ReplyDeleteWow! That's some heavy shit, man.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Janie
No way to top this comment.
DeleteI'm going to sit here and digest that for a while
ReplyDeleteGood one Youngman. Short and to the point! lol!
ReplyDeletegut-wrenching deep meaning! - i gots no puns
ReplyDeleteHow does one get around self defecation? Contract that shit out?
ReplyDeleteSo touching... you can really feel the inner torment of the poet.
ReplyDeleteHow deep did you reach for this one?
ReplyDeleteThat truly is deep.
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